It was a little confusing when the fight showed up as there did not seem to be any build up to it. The transitions of the hanging solar system worked well with the music, though at times it seemed like the shots weren't focused before filming.
Really great shots when the girl; the in and out of focus worked perfectly. The cutting between the shots at the end was also great. Although, in the first shot of the girl going to her bedroom she should have stayed in frame.
Good Video! I liked how you guys used the meaning of the bed of being homesick i think it went well. Overall the video was interesting with the planets in the room showing its own little world.
i liked how oviecs it was they cared for each other and the shots of her alone in general were well done. I would have licked to see more fights slowly getting bigger or at lest one big one.
I really liked the planets that you used, there were shots where you couldn't see the fishing line and they looked like they were floating by themselves and it looked really cool. I like how you kept coming back to the same shot on the porch, it made it seem like that was a significant moment for her. The end got a little confusing with him leaving and then all of the sudden they were holding hands, i get that it was one last fond memory for her before we show her alone. but i almost wanted the video to end after she walk inside and slams the door- so you could see the indoor shot at the beginning of her coming in and end it with the outside view, i think that would have been neat to see.
I liked the swirling whirling planets. You had a nice variety of shots. The heart falling out of their hands worked really well with symbolizing how their relationship was falling apart. However, the fight seemed a little oddly placed.
It was a little confusing when the fight showed up as there did not seem to be any build up to it. The transitions of the hanging solar system worked well with the music, though at times it seemed like the shots weren't focused before filming.
ReplyDeleteReally great shots when the girl; the in and out of focus worked perfectly. The cutting between the shots at the end was also great. Although, in the first shot of the girl going to her bedroom she should have stayed in frame.
ReplyDeleteGood Video! I liked how you guys used the meaning of the bed of being homesick i think it went well. Overall the video was interesting with the planets in the room showing its own little world.
ReplyDeletei liked how oviecs it was they cared for each other and the shots of her alone in general were well done. I would have licked to see more fights slowly getting bigger or at lest one big one.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the planets that you used, there were shots where you couldn't see the fishing line and they looked like they were floating by themselves and it looked really cool. I like how you kept coming back to the same shot on the porch, it made it seem like that was a significant moment for her. The end got a little confusing with him leaving and then all of the sudden they were holding hands, i get that it was one last fond memory for her before we show her alone. but i almost wanted the video to end after she walk inside and slams the door- so you could see the indoor shot at the beginning of her coming in and end it with the outside view, i think that would have been neat to see.
ReplyDeleteA lot of the shots of the Solar System had great Composition. The editing worked great for the message of this video.
ReplyDeleteI liked the swirling whirling planets. You had a nice variety of shots. The heart falling out of their hands worked really well with symbolizing how their relationship was falling apart. However, the fight seemed a little oddly placed.
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